Wednesday 7 May 2014

Livia's 5 sentence challenge

A really busy train station.
People are working very hard.
Happy families going on holiday.
"Thank-you" said the sailor collecting his ticket.
The train is bright red like a fire engine.
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  1. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 22:28

    Five fantastic sentences! Well done, Livia. You even included some speech with speech marks and I loved how you said that the train was bright like a fire engine. Super work. Keep it up!
    Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain

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